Bulan di secangkir kopi

Bulan di secangkir kopi lebih indah dari bulan di langit tinggi
Kepekatan riak mata buta yang mengenal cahaya

Bulan di secangkir kopi lebih indah dari bulan di langit tinggi
Kehausan tapi tak ingin tahu rasanya kehilangan

Bulan di secangkir kopi lebih indah dari bulan di langit tinggi
Kepahitan air mata dari mata yang dituduh buta

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(Agustus 2009)

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14 Responses

  1. Bulan dan kopi.. 2hal yang sangat amat disukai kekasihku..
    Salam kenal..

    yang jualan:
    kalo eslemon?

    Coffeelover - September 2, 2009 at 12:05 am

  2. Dear Ice,
    Yes,he did it again
    Lay his hope on me
    Then leave it,have he sleep?I really hate my self.,

    Ur friend

    S.E.V

    Star_eyes_girl - September 4, 2009 at 12:28 am

  3. Dear ice,
    Sorry to disturb..i cant hardly close my eyes

    Have u ever si stars&moon in de same sky?dazzling isnt it?*tears*

    Star_eyes_girl - September 4, 2009 at 12:59 am

  4. Dear Ice
    Today i woke up early then find misery&mistery
    U know what,I like puzzle but its really confusing
    Is teru&nims one guy?

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 5:59 am

  5. Dear ice,
    Actuallay from di other day I want give a comment,but I cancled,then try battle with my own theory..

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:10 am

  6. I promised wont write poem,its really hard,if u knw when I be able to be a gud writer.,desprate situation ^^v
    Do U feel de same?

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:16 am

  7. Ice,tell him I’m give up&decide to joy moon from my window,I realize drink “it” from the cup just make a residu..a dark residu

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:24 am

  8. Ice,i’m sorry if already annoyed u cuz these comment,thx 4 all ur kind,ur poems fills me up&make me lose to my own day dream..^^

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:29 am

  9. All de dicsi and the repeatation.,cup,blind,moon,drink siluet of coffe&eye..Ups 4 de last i have to say my objection,,!!

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:35 am

  10. She isn’t blind just a green fall in luv girl
    What a poor,too young to understand dat feeling*nyengir*

    U fix it in last line ^^

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:45 am

  11. What a good day,i’ll finish my purpose & dump the moon ^^v *komatkamit moga g baca*
    Once again Thx a lot for everything and hey

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 6:55 am

  12. Dont consume too much cafein..I promise i’ll help to explain if there is a “problem” Sumimasen-_-”

    Gestalt Venus comune

    S.E.V

    Star_eyes_Eve - September 4, 2009 at 7:07 am

  13. Star_eyes_Eve said:
    She isn’t blind just a green fall in luv girl
    What a poor,too young to understand dat feeling*nyengir*

    U fix it in last line ^^

    Yang jualan es:
    The last line said :
    “Kepahitan air mata dari mata yang dituduh buta”

    perhatikan kata ‘dituduh’.
    ‘dituduh buta’ bukan berarti buta.
    jadi ga ada yang perlu di-fix-kan … 🙂

    abe - November 5, 2009 at 5:28 am

  14. Dear ice,
    Well,I give up to decode ur magicword.,
    IMHO “yg dtuduh buta” sharper than just “buta” dicsi,ehe.,*hrup p pd sensitip*


    yang jualan:
    menyerah minum eslemon? oh tidak… hehe :p

    Cherry "sakula" Lee shoulang - November 5, 2009 at 11:53 am

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